The game looked promising to bad there has not been any updates in years

This is really good so far. Keep it up. I can not really see anything wrong with it at this point in time. The only real bad thing i can even say is that I wish it was longer but it's cool since you have not put the whole thing in yet. I can't wait for the stuff that gave this a XXX rating

How is the writing and story?

Everything fine: good writing and interesting story.

How are the characters so far?

Pretty well done, though still in early development.

Is the game better with colored dialog like at the start or just plain text like the rest of it?

Colored dialog is much better, if it isn't too much work.

Are any passages too long? Too short?

Just perfect. :)

Are there any questions you'd like to ask Mia that weren't offered?

Amazingly not. Seems like everything necessary is already explained.

I'm no artist so manipulating pictures isn't much of an option for me. I'm currently using pictures of celebrities. Should I continue with these? Find porn stars? Go without pictures?

I just love those pictures and would like too see more of them.

--> Keep up the good work. I'm waiting for more ;)

What's there is great. The story is fun and sexy and the potential for the choices you make affecting the game play is exciting! Looking forward to more.

 How is the writing and story?

• Well written and interesting
  

 How are the characters so far?

• The characters are more than just one dimensional, and I enjoyed hearing their stories and imagining how they might react in different situation.

 Is the game better with colored dialog like at the start or just plain text like the rest of it?

• I enjoy the colored dialog, not a necesity, but a nice touch.
  

 Are any passages too long? Too short?

• I think they were good, wouldn't want them any longer than they are though.
  

 Are there any questions you'd like to ask Mia that weren't offered?

• I'd love to hear even more of her backstory, but i think i would like it to be revealed to me slowly over time.

I'm no artist so manipulating pictures isn't much of an option for me. I'm currently using pictures of celebrities. Should I continue with these? Find porn stars? Go without pictures?

• Love the pics, please add more. Looking forward to seeing some latex beauties. ;)
  

*Rubber hugs*

tami

• How is the writing and story? - Excellent so far! It really has potential if the writer can keep moving forward and not let it splinter too much it might just grow to something amazing.
• How are the characters so far? - I'm digging the characters though their development is early.  All of the rescuers are just faces right now.  Not much diferentiating them.
• Is the game better with colored dialog like at the start or just plain text like the rest of it?  - Go with colored dialgue.  I like it.
• Are any passages too long? Too short?  - They seem to flow.  Do what works.
• Are there any questions you'd like to ask Mia that weren't offered? - Why not attack Tran Global in the real world?  Burn down their server farm and expose their illegal activities?
• I'm no artist so manipulating pictures isn't much of an option for me. I'm currently using pictures of celebrities. Should I continue with these? Find porn stars? Go without pictures?  Go with nauty pictures that don't have faces.  Its easier.