Looks promising, though I've only played the intro part so far (may edit after part 2).

My main feedback so far would be it doesn't seem the type of story that's going to have TF in it at this point, so like a disclamer at the beginning with assurances it's going to be there, and maybe pointers in the options on how to get there. (This would ruin the surprise, but seeing as most people here will be coming at it for TFs it seems worthwhile.)

The second thing is that while having sexuality selection come up organically sounds like a good idea, because I didn't know the four options I selected 'alpha' when I saw it had shemales, wheras had I known about bi-curious at the time (I only know now from the ending splash) I would've selected that to see all possible content. So just a straight-up unmissable four-way choice as like the first choice in the game might be a better way to do things.

As others have said, English could do with a polish, but that kind of thing can wait until last once the game, art and story are all in place. At this point it'll just distract you.

It definitely needs to be made clearer that the "Intro" download is required and should be run first, not an earlier version of the game that has been superseded.

The game is designed for incest and the naming of characters and relationships is an attempt to dodge around Patreon rules that have seen this kind of content forced off the platform in the last year or so. If you don't find fantasising about incest titillating then trying to set the characters up as friends, orphans that shared an orphanage or distant relatives can be attempted but it really doesn't work. The storyline isn't flexible in that way and it further spoils the weak script.

The graphics are not the game's strong point but do help tell the story. Unfortunately they bloat the game file out to a significant size. If you like the incest kink then there are better games available on sites that don't require TF to be included in their listings. On the plus side, a little polishing of the script would pay big dividends. The author has put in a lot of work on this already.

To anyone wanting to play this game or comment: DO NOT START WITH THE MOST RECENT FILE

To understand what is going on you need to play the "Introduction" file first, then proceed to "S1M01", which is the first act after the intoduction.

The art is likely to always be polarizing, I consider it good enough to tell the story, but its certainly not sexy, but at least things make sense if you do them in the correct order, otherwise you'll be blindsided by being told by a character you picked a relationship to like "roommate" for that "they still dream of when you used to tuck them into bed and read them a story"... these people are NOT blank slates the user can choose a role for, I assume the "pick a realationship" exists merely to avoid legal issues with certainly realtionships by leaivng it up to the user to fill in those boxes.

I don't mind the graphics, honestly it's the least of any issue I can take with this game. But as others have said, the plot needs some cleaning, or you need an editor that knows english better. At first I thought I kind of figured it out due to the two characters asking why you left, and then talking about all four of you together. So these are your kids having tracked you down right? Maybe no, because then they talk about "Mom and Dad"...and at that point I kind of gave up trying to make sense of anything. I became a patron just trying to figure out what might be going on...but all you did was list tags. I didn't even see any notice of transformation content, and all I DID see was some mention of aliens.

It's always good to see new creators and their work...but you need to polish what you have quite heavily at this point.

Contrary to the other commentors, I actually think the art is fine, and you create better expressions and poses, and show ethnicitiy better than many others who work with 3d models. You can also easily distinguish the characters from one another without resorting to creating complete caricatures that other 3d models have to rely on.

That said, the story is very difficult to follow. 

It's not just that we're expected to make decisions about things we know nothing about, but most of the dialogue seems to be referencing things we know nothing about as well. More than that, It doesn't even reference it with context clues that we could use to piece the story together. I'm almost a week in, and still have no idea what's going on, and worse, haven't seen a hint of tf content. 

I would similarly recommend that you find a proof reader. 

I'm really impressed with the work you've put into this, but this just isn't a game I can enjoy in its current state.