Make Maids is a TG/TF game written in Twine by subli.
You wake up, and wipe the sleep from your eyes. After getting out bed you change your boxers for a new pair from the drawer, then start going through the clothes you discarded on the floor last night. The pants are still fine, but you need a clean shirt. You throw the dirty clothes in a corner and get one from the drawer.
To get to the kitchen and make breakfast you need to make a path through the mess that is your apartment. You make bowl of cereal and dump the dirty bowl in the sink where it joins the washing ups from earlier in the week.
BZZZZ! BZZZZ!
Surprised that someone's visiting at this time of day, you go to open the door...
It’s always a pleasure when a game tries to build out why the character’s POV is changing throughout the TF. I’ll echo a few other reviewers, the endings are… abrupt, and it certainly makes you wonder if the author had more in store, but simply couldn’t find the time to expand upon those storylines. TGTFs aren’t my shtick, but when done well and explained with a thorough backstory, I can’t fault how masterfully it can be accomplished.
Minor grammar flaws aside, there’s not much to point out from a constructive component. It's been nearly 5 years since release, so there’s no point in trying to lay out what could be fixed. Instead, I would just suggest giving the game a shot. Don’t expect too much, but it was a pleasant read nonetheless.
I was just getting into this when it ended really abruptly. Feels kind of unfinished even though it's apparently finished. Good while it lasted, though.
Short, cute, and complete. Like maids? Give it a try.
The writing is good and solid. I did thou feel abit railroaded while playing/reading it. 6/10
The endings in the game are abrupt and it really stands out, but this is because the game upto that pont is so good and engrossing. I didn't even notice the spelling errors mentioned so I guess they are either fixed or simply not noticable.
I would love to see an expansion to the endings as the TF is well handled both with the pysical and mental elements and an ero scene or 2 would be a lovely reward to conclude the storylines.
Highly recommended.
